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Sunday, February 19, 2006

This headline is the bomb

The Scotsman is a good paper, but probably could have found a better way to say this:

Israel drops huge financial bombshell on Palestinians

I was thinking the copy editor who wrote the headline had an isolated case of the sillies, but apparently the writer has it, too.

Here's the first sentence:

Israel yesterday fired the opening salvo in an economic war...

2 Comments:

  • Media worldwide certainly does like to stir up conflict and controversy.

    Is the Scotsman a private newspaper, or state-run? I'll bet that it's private, trying to sell papers with headlines like that.

    I agree that it's a good publication, nonetheless.

    By Blogger t'su, at 1:50 PM  

  • Yeah, I'm pretty sure it's private. The metaphors are just in poor taste, I think. It annoys me when sports broadcasters and writers over-use war analogies, but to do it when talking about a financial situation in a region that is somewhat at war... that's just bad.

    I do sympathize with headline writers who have to be as creative as possible to fill rigid spaces. But there must have been a better way to say it.

    By Blogger bp, at 9:41 PM  

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